Friday, October 24, 2014

my poem

Gabe Cratcha What I'm All About My name is not inportant should anyone know anything about me. I am the utmost different, unique in my own ways. I come from a house where physical things mean nothing without family. Bonding over sports or whatever I can to make the world a little more innocent. As for me it is the sport of rugby with my brother. The adrenaline when the coach blows the whistle means players are going to get knocked down if they dont get moving But it always wasent this way it could be anything I can could have done to bond with my family. It could be helping Mom cook in the kitchen from playing catch with my Dad in the backyard. The memroies are nice,sweet like when we were kids going in a candy shop, picking from so much candy my dreams high with my imagination filled with hopes and dreams protected by nothing but my parents. But then I grew up and releize that the moon doesnt have legs to follow you. The world hits us like a bull and you start to cherish the little things that you still have. For me it is my lucky wolf claw, I wear it to every rugby game but dare not wear it so that it wont get broke at least I can protect that. This is who I am. This is what makes me human, the choices I make. The ability to learn from my mistakes while I am young. This is were greatness if formed. This is where I can get back up when the world knockes me down and say lets go again. I have a choice in that moment and that choice will stay with me forever and never go away so I try to make the right one. I can choose to make my own difference. This is what I are. This is what i'm all about.

12 comments:

  1. I like how you said that your name is not important. It's different from what others think.

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  2. I love the tone of the poem it holds so much meaning

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  3. How many others in your family play sports? What do they play?

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  4. Your prose was inspiring, and I like the imagery with the candy store part.

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  5. "the moon doesnt have legs to follow you." is my favorite part. It really stuck to me , very powerful.

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  6. I like how you compare bonding now to how people bonded awhile ago

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  7. Gave, I really like your simile stating that the world hits you like a bull and then you start to cherish what you have.

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  8. hile you read you skipped over lots of sentences, try not to rush your reading.

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  9. I like you pov on what you think is important

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  10. Gabe that was a special and I know you put heart into it.

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  11. You spoke some serious truths in this writing. What you wrote sounded like something a philosopher would say. Awesome writing.

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  12. Yaaaaaasssss 🙌🙌🙌 I love your smilies 💯💯💯🙌🙌🙌🙌

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